Question7
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Friday, 8 April 2011
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Good Points:
Good use of sound to add suspense
Killing scene was well planned and presented
Logo created was good
Good titles
Consistant with the genre
sounds follows genre, slightly creepy however fits
Bad Points:
Scenes are slow
Stood still no drama on speech
Edit shot maybe add more
More actors confuses audience
Less of the board scene very slow, too much
Last effect on directed by wasn't applied
Sign in bathroom
Action Points:
When i have looked at my action points needed we decided to alter most scenes in our opening sequence the biggest scene we are planning on changing is the the dialogue scene we are changing the types of shot and adding more in such as long shots, low cuts etc. We are also cutting down dialogue to not bore the audience as much. We are also changing the board scene and making it shorter so the audience doesn't loose intrest in the clip.
Good use of sound to add suspense
Killing scene was well planned and presented
Logo created was good
Good titles
Consistant with the genre
sounds follows genre, slightly creepy however fits
Bad Points:
Scenes are slow
Stood still no drama on speech
Edit shot maybe add more
More actors confuses audience
Less of the board scene very slow, too much
Last effect on directed by wasn't applied
Sign in bathroom
Action Points:
When i have looked at my action points needed we decided to alter most scenes in our opening sequence the biggest scene we are planning on changing is the the dialogue scene we are changing the types of shot and adding more in such as long shots, low cuts etc. We are also cutting down dialogue to not bore the audience as much. We are also changing the board scene and making it shorter so the audience doesn't loose intrest in the clip.
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